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last day of DFC - villanelle by ~onlyevier:icononlyevier:



your eyes may see double, but mine see thrice
your combined sight causes all this trouble
touch your forehead, hope your third eye's enticed.

your fingers waltz on the table like mice
my sight on your hand, my mind like a pebble
your eyes may see double, but mine see thrice

travelling through the mundane, it's suffice
to say any mind you had is reduced to rubble
touch your forehead, hope your third eye's enticed

sometimes you wonder if you're smarter than dice
you gamble, walk through the alleys and stumble
your eyes may see double, but mine see thrice

"the best way to live is beneath a guise"
you seemed not to notice my breath tremble
touch your forehead, hope your third eye's enticed

you'll get yourself killed someday, it would be nice
to say "I told you so" when you fail and fumble.
your eyes may see double, but mine see thrice
touch your forehead, hope your third eye's enticed
©2008-2009 ~onlyevier
:icononlyevier:

Author's Comments

I don't know. Fake people.
I always get stuck on refrains. I get attached to them as soon as I write them; it's not a good thing.


the last day of DFC, and I'm going out without a bang.
2:49AM. I am sorely disappointed in myself. :D

DFC: [link]

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:icontamabald:
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:peace:

information is not knowledge
knowledge is not wisdom
wisdom is not truth
:icononlyevier:
thanks :cuddle:


I realized that this is my first deviation of the new year.
I also realized (before I wrote this)
that I had slept through the countdown :ohmygod:
:iconwizemanbob:
Totally a gambler's chant. I love it.

--
I only laugh ’cause it hurts to cry
I only live for spite of those who die
I’m only here because people will ask why
I only laugh ’cause I don’t want to cry ~FABWM
:icontamabald:
hey, no big deal, i probably would've missed it myself if it weren't for people around :giggle:

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:peace:

information is not knowledge
knowledge is not wisdom
wisdom is not truth
:icononlyevier:
you think so?

thanks. :glomp:
:iconkiwi-damnation:
Fantastic, people who have not a clue about life. Well put. Congrats on finishing. 2 hours is nothing.

--
One who lives without love can never truly live... One who embraces love can never truly die... 'kiwi-damnation'

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